Bodacious Bomb Queen

[Toddoss]

Alrighty this was a picture that I did for a pummel street fight and was hankerin to draw some women and Bomb Queen for some reason. Havent ever drawn her and I think that was what spurred it.

Anyway I was really trying to focus on my inking so be extra attentive to that and give me some feedback. Even if something isn't wrong but you would've done it differently let me know or maybe you think of another option than how I did it tell me. I really want to start excelling in my inking.

With out further ado here she is the ruller of NewPort City (i think thats right )

BOMB QUEEN

[Wo-Nellie]

Nice full rendering.
And it's New Port City I believe.

[Toddoss]

Thanks appreciate the compliment and I think your right about New Port

[paladis]

Wow, that's seriously amazing...kind of like it better than what the mags current artist is doing...not that I'm a fan of the mag...looked at it once or twice but couldn't get into it which I'm amazed at because I love all things booobies

[yomark]

Don't have any critiques or complaints (I've already downoaded it). The only thing that I see is that the background linework seems to be fighting with the foreground, making it feel a little busy. You might've already had it in mind to address that with the coloring, but onw way or another, I'd like to see that background recede somwhow. Fantastic work!

[Morganza]

I like the artwork, my only crit is the armor style, it looks like MegaMan armor, is that intentional. Either way the armor looks odd on her IMO.

[Toddoss]

Thanks guys!

paladis:Thanks that means a lot. Ya know my wife bought the first trade not knowing what it was and we were both taken back by how in-your-face lude it was but as we read I found that it was a great antithesis to heros. It was like reading Wanted but comical. It was just satisfying to see the bad guys win.

yomark: I agree with the backround and I think that if I didnt let any of those lines touch the her it might seperate her enough but the idea was to eventually color this and would be addressed there but you are right i shoulda seperated it better.

Morganza: It totally has a Mega Man feel to it but I referenced the comic and I might have accentuated it but I thought it was pretty true to her costume. http://www.comicspace.com/jimmykitty...file_id=191639
I agree with you tho especially with the arm pieces.

[MC Fumunda]

Her left arm seems a bit too long, from elbow to wrist. Otherwise, quite a nice piece.

[Toddoss]

Her left arm seems a bit too long, from elbow to wrist. Otherwise, quite a nice piece.

Hmmm it most definitely is. Totally didnt notice that.