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  • Please Crit...I demand it!

    www.kevinsteward.blogspot.com
    You can't succeed unless you fail-pigeonmilk
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  • #2
    I believe this got my vote in a close one in pummel! Looks great my friend. The only thing I would work on is zangief's anatomy. It looks a little off in the arms anatomy wise but overall, everything looks great. Dahlsim (sp) looks cool with the elongated strike coming down. Keep up the good work!
    Bat Hilliard
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    • #3
      You shall demand nothing from me!
      I completely agree with Bathill.

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      • #4
        The light and dark lines are really random and I can't see why that would be. Kind of mucks up the pic.
        Maybe its just a poor scanning .

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        • #5
          yeah the density of the lines throws me off and the guys wrist closest to use needs some shaping and background work needs to be done. but really, u have a nice skill set and i think u r on ur way bud. I just think u need practice with line weight

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          • #6
            The characters look good , I agree about the arm anatomy being the week area on Zangief .

            Looks like alot of work .

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            • #7
              wondering if throwing some soild blacks in the BG would throw the image off any....and some grays in the tree tops maybe?

              Thanks for all the crits peeps!
              www.kevinsteward.blogspot.com
              You can't succeed unless you fail-pigeonmilk
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              https://twitter.com/StewDaSix2
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              • #8
                It maybe the camera phone image...but I was trying for some change in line weight with the characters and the bg, I used a .3 rapidograph pen and a sharpie felt tip fine point pen on the characters.

                I need to scan this inwith the stitch assist on my scanner, this camera phone sucks!
                www.kevinsteward.blogspot.com
                You can't succeed unless you fail-pigeonmilk
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