Alice in Wonderland (wrestling, catfighting spoof comic idea)

[sidneymt]

Long ago it was meant to be a comicbook story. I was hoping for more feedback.



Newer drawing


Now I'm back promoting the idea with renewed spirit.
I guess it would be a good selling comic but so silly and imature that some hardcore fanboys would freakout... I don't know.

I'd like to know from you guys what do you think about the idea and the drawing of course.

[Ra Havok]

This is hot.

The drawings are very solid. My only critique is in regards to the story: huh? Alice in catfightland? Could you explain that?

[red7ine]

I really hate to continually gush over someone's work, but this is great stuff. Your work has a definite flow and professional confidence that is just fantastic. I love the way you draw women that remains sexy without being vulgar.

I also hate that I can't offer any real criticism... any anatomical issues are related only to your style, and I can't fault that. Can't wait to see more!

[sidneymt]

This is hot.

The drawings are very solid. My only critique is in regards to the story: huh? Alice in catfightland? Could you explain that?

Oh yeah right! My fault. Its a spoof comedy so you can expect the classic Alice Wonderland story line with some agressive twist, like Flamingo Hockey.

The main character is Nadya Shmeleva (second name may still change). She is a literature student and train martial arts at Sambo dojo. After an accidental K.O. she "wakes up" in Wonderland where the story begins. There she confronts many of her personality imperfections merged into the fabled metaphors of Lewis Carroll's book.

Sorry is I'm a bit unclear... I'm still learning english language, but when it comes to comicbook dialogs I sure I can handle with it.

[Wo-Nellie]

I think it looks excellent. It's similar to an idea my friend Jerry has been batting around for ages, but not so similar as to make anyone .
People have done Alice parodies and re-imaginings before, but excellent artists and writers can make something new of a 200+ year old story, and I have little doubt you too can make something cool of this if you put your back into it.

[sidneymt]

I think it looks excellent. It's similar to an idea my friend Jerry has been batting around for ages, but not so similar as to make anyone .
People have done Alice parodies and re-imaginings before, but excellent artists and writers can make something new of a 200+ year old story, and I have little doubt you too can make something cool of this if you put your back into it.

Thanks a lot!

[staunkedaber]

I'd buy it. you really should make this. the only thing i could say i don't like is the title. other than that, great stuff

[acosby]

There are more than a few Catfight Niche fights that would buy this I'd bet.

[sidneymt]

I'd buy it. you really should make this. the only thing i could say i don't like is the title. other than that, great stuff

Title is important...

I think now catfight is kinda pejorative word to mess with, maybe?... It would be so plastered that people would think it lite porn or hentai whatever.

I must think something cooller.

Thanks for the input

[Ra Havok]

Title is important...

I think now catfight is kinda pejorative word to mess with, maybe?... It would be so plastered that people would think it lite porn or hentai whatever.

I must think something cooller.

Thanks for the input

I was looking at your deviantart gallery, and again, your stuff is hot. Really pleasant style you've developped.

As for the title/cover - I definitely think there's some room for misinterpretation there. I bet quite a few people will think that it is light porn or hentai-ish stuff with the panty-shots and your sexy style. :/

[sidneymt]

No I don't wanna be misinterpreted...
Well there is unavoidable panty shots and some fetishes, but its not really the focus, the focus is fun and comedy. There is a lot of sex parodies out there already.

[Morganza]

You had me at "catfight", looks fun, I'd buy it.

[therealArturo]

Solid work! I love the spoof and love the illustrations. Nice Job.

[CrazyMobius]

Awesome! Do it!

PS how did you do the shaded skin on leotard cat? Was it digital or analogue?

And if digital what program and effect?

[sidneymt]

You had me at "catfight", looks fun, I'd buy it.

Thanks I know you americans like so much girls fights... I got owned by that, you damn culture invaders bastards hehe.

Awesome! Do it!

PS how did you do the shaded skin on leotard cat? Was it digital or analogue?

And if digital what program and effect?

Done with photoshop, filter> pixelation> color half-tone. there you can addjust the numbers. Remember to work on gray image.