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    10x15 Pencils and inks by me, its pretty much done but i can make some digital fixes when you have some crits. I had a shaky hand and the eyes came out alot different than my pencils. so might redraw them. Let me know what you think. thanks!

    Dan

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    Theres something about the way you inked this that is very cool, but I just can't put my finger on the exact reason. Nice overall pic though.

    As for potential improvements:

    Eyes: Yeah, you probably want to readdress them a bit. They are shifted to the right side of her head too much (with the current nose position being the mid-point of the face).

    Lips- The lips actually stand out to me some too (personal preference). Seems like they could use a little reshaping to just make them more appealing and less peanut-shaped.

    Head- Hers is just a smidge too small for her body it seems, but this may not be worth readdressing depending on the level of difficulty that digital adjustment presents. I know nothing of the whole digital art thing so I couldn't give a good call on that.

    Those things aside, I really do like what you've got here. It is a really cool inking!!!
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      Thanks, its mostly brush with a little croquill for smaller details.

      Ok, I'll take another look at fixing the face. yeah that was my feeling to.

      Thanks,
      dan
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      Check out my website:http://capitumini.com/
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      • #4
        made some tweaks to the face.

        My Deviant Art gallery http://the-standard.deviantart.com/
        Check out my website:http://capitumini.com/
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