Fear Itself - Looking for Feedback.

[Vision]

I'm in the process of self-publishing a survival horror story set in WW1 Romania.

I've provided the link to my blog with the first 5 pages. It is still a little rough, as miscommunication between myself and the artist resulted in panel breakdown problems. But this is just to see if people would be interested in a longer story, or if they would want to see what happens.

All feedback is appreciated, thanks.

http://fearisvision.wordpress.com/

[Eric Henson]

Hmmmm...its hard to really see whats going on due to size, but it seems like its fairly interesting. I think the artwork could use some polishing up though (particularlly the last page/hand holding the mask). I know you didn't draw it but its still something I noticed.

Maybe try posting it on the forum itself so we can get a better look at the pages.