Dago [it should be"hi! i'm new here" etc...]

[::VeRBaL::]

hi ev'rybody
this is my first post in here
i'd appreciate some [more is better ] crit on my last piece
the character is Dago from Eura comics, an italian publisher

[BringerOfStorms]

The background makes it a little harder to read than it has to be. Another spot where I get lost is right in the middle, between all the dudes, it is just sortve a jumble of blackness... Overall the classic triangular composition works well for me, and the mood is great. Keep at it, and welcome to PJ!

~BoS

[sacredbob]

I like the composition as well! The rendering of the cloth is really nice; it acurrately shows the folds and the pen/marker/brush(?) work even gives it a nice texture.
I've got to agree with Bringer of Storms, though- the background does make the figures kind of hard to see. I think if you had the same care and rendering technique given t the setting as well as the characters, this may have been a bit stronger.
As it is, though, it IS a fantastic image! Nice work!


Oh, and welcome to Penciljack!

[::VeRBaL::]

first of all, many thanks for both the crits/comments!!!

The background makes it a little harder to read than it has to be. Another spot where I get lost is right in the middle, between all the dudes, it is just sortve a jumble of blackness... Overall the classic triangular composition works well for me, and the mood is great. Keep at it, and welcome to PJ!

~BoS

I like the composition as well! The rendering of the cloth is really nice; it acurrately shows the folds and the pen/marker/brush(?) work even gives it a nice texture.
I've got to agree with Bringer of Storms, though- the background does make the figures kind of hard to see. I think if you had the same care and rendering technique given t the setting as well as the characters, this may have been a bit stronger.
As it is, though, it IS a fantastic image! Nice work!


Oh, and welcome to Penciljack!

yes, maybe i should have made something more clean in the background or filled it with some shape in silouette mode to render the image easy reading

many thanks again!!!