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  • Dago [it should be"hi! i'm new here" etc...]

    hi ev'rybody
    this is my first post in here
    i'd appreciate some [more is better ] crit on my last piece
    the character is Dago from Eura comics, an italian publisher


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    The background makes it a little harder to read than it has to be. Another spot where I get lost is right in the middle, between all the dudes, it is just sortve a jumble of blackness... Overall the classic triangular composition works well for me, and the mood is great. Keep at it, and welcome to PJ!

    ~BoS
    PUMMEL LHW: 16 wins | 13 losses | 1 tie | 12 ko's | 0 no shows


    DA

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    • #3
      I like the composition as well! The rendering of the cloth is really nice; it acurrately shows the folds and the pen/marker/brush(?) work even gives it a nice texture.
      I've got to agree with Bringer of Storms, though- the background does make the figures kind of hard to see. I think if you had the same care and rendering technique given t the setting as well as the characters, this may have been a bit stronger.
      As it is, though, it IS a fantastic image! Nice work!


      Oh, and welcome to Penciljack!
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      • #4
        first of all, many thanks for both the crits/comments!!!

        Originally posted by BringerOfStorms View Post
        The background makes it a little harder to read than it has to be. Another spot where I get lost is right in the middle, between all the dudes, it is just sortve a jumble of blackness... Overall the classic triangular composition works well for me, and the mood is great. Keep at it, and welcome to PJ!

        ~BoS
        Originally posted by sacredbob View Post
        I like the composition as well! The rendering of the cloth is really nice; it acurrately shows the folds and the pen/marker/brush(?) work even gives it a nice texture.
        I've got to agree with Bringer of Storms, though- the background does make the figures kind of hard to see. I think if you had the same care and rendering technique given t the setting as well as the characters, this may have been a bit stronger.
        As it is, though, it IS a fantastic image! Nice work!


        Oh, and welcome to Penciljack!

        yes, maybe i should have made something more clean in the background or filled it with some shape in silouette mode to render the image easy reading

        many thanks again!!!

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