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  • Green Lantern VS Sinestro

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  • #2
    I like it!, love the rendering
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    • #3
      Green Lantern's chest emblem should be slightly tilted,the muscle anatomy on his right wrist/forearm is just a little wonky, besides those two crits think it's a pretty awesome piece! I love your pencils and always look forward to looking at your new posts. BTW it's Monday.....where's the next Hulk sketch?
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      • #4
        Awesome work but GL's fist seems way big. the hand extended should be half the forearm length. His fist appears to be that size without fingers extended. Also I'd drop GL's inside ankle bone down a bit farther than his outside. it's one of those shapes that everyone sees too much and knows when it is wrong. great rendering on this piece!!
        Last edited by lucasnickerson; 09-29-2009, 01:46 AM. Reason: add

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        • #5
          Beautiful piece. This would be a joy to ink.
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          • #6
            looks pretty good. title should be "green lantern beat down on sinestro"
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            • #7
              Originally posted by lucasnickerson View Post
              GL's fist seems way big.
              Agreed. It's nearly as big as his head -- and totally out of proportion with eveything else in the pic (you need to thin the wrist as well).

              I really like the way you've drawn Sinestro though. He looks like a really evil little weasel
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              • #8
                Aside from the mentioned mentioned minor anatomical corrections, it is a very good piece of art.

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                • #9
                  i likey....

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                  • #10
                    Keep working on your anatomy, and proportions, this is a strong piece. You have a good grasp of the shadowing and how to use minimal feathers to get maximum results, keep it up. Look forward to seeing more work.
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                    • #11
                      I really like the rendering here. I would love to see what you do with sequentials and storytelling. It'll be super interesting to see that beautiful hatchwork translate over the course of a story. CHeers!

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                      • #12
                        People have already commented on the proportions but theres also a lot of tangents and the planets clutter up the main imagery. Nice rendering as always, tho.
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                        • #13
                          I think the Green Lantern fist is the only problem. The pic...the way you draw is outstanding.
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                          • #14
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                            • #15
                              Aside from the fist mentioned ... I have been trying to figure out what is throwing off the face for me ... and it finally came to me. His right ear (our left) is way smaller then the left (our right), and it is making the face look skewed to me. Other then those things ... this is a kick butt piece.
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