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  • #16
    in my opinions its wrong there are certain RULES how things ''should'' look.
    ye perhaps its comic style but in real life you see soo many different angles and poses that may seem unnecessary or wrong..
    but when the anatomy is right then there are no mistakes.
    when artist want to show sum in certain light then THIS IS IT.

    dont say you shouldnt do this and that but find whats interesting is others works.
    ofc when the anatomy is completly wrong then its good to say sum about it.

    sry my crapy english but i hope you all understand what i mean.

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    • #17
      Originally posted by Pifalo View Post
      Snateyingling- Thanks a lot, I'm glad my shading was good for you, but try to get a hold of yourself... you can look away now.

      UnsungGuru- That would be awesome. he would be in surgery shooting arrows at the enemy

      Loston- Thanks so much for the detailed crit and kind words. I know it takes a lot of time to do detailed critiques, and I want you to know I appreciate it.
      The issues you brought up, I am in complete agreement with. Especially the left forearm, yours looks so much better and clearer then mine. The bigger calf muscle on the forward leg looks way better too.
      Again, thanks so much for the help. Your not nearly as big a jerk as everyone around here said you were
      I was glad to help, Pifalo. You really do good work!

      As for others who might think I'm a jerk, well--I'm a jerk who knows good work when I see it, and I'm seeing it here! As for "everyone" claiming I'm a jerk...well--rest assured that I have my assassins working on that problem even as we speak...
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      • #18
        Pifalo your Hawkeye has a more realistic quality to it. Hawk's forearm is a bit on the short side, but a little foreshortening intuition would fix that. Extend the foreshortening of the left arm to make it seemed foreshortened, but making the forearm in the way you depict it, the forearm would not be larger than the upper arm. As far as the shadows go, there fine.

        The same goes for his extended left leg. The calf area would not be larger than the upper leg.

        Now if your going for that cartoon look, then yeah proportions of body parts are larger in foreshortening.

        The way you defined your lines and added your own concept to Hawkeye is a very well developed technique. Its realistic and if that is what your going for, then make the few adjustments in the foreshorten areas and move on to the next project.

        VERY IMPRESSIVE.

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        • #19
          Cool stuff. With that badass expression he looks like Dark Reign Hawkeye (Bullseye)

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          • #20
            I was just kidding Loston, I dont think anyone here thinks your a jerk. You help way too many people for that. Plus, I'm afraid of Bruce Lee... just thought you should know that Thanks again Loston.

            Thanks Pencilartist, you kind of reenforced what Loston said, and I agree. Its funny, I like to draw in a more realistic style, but I work in animation, and am always having to draw cartoony. Irony, wouldnt you say

            Thanks Ken, I kind of like the extreme expression too.
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            • #21
              Originally posted by Pifalo View Post
              I was just kidding Loston, I dont think anyone here thinks your a jerk. You help way too many people for that. Plus, I'm afraid of Bruce Lee... just thought you should know that Thanks again Loston.

              Oh yeah, I got that you were kidding. I was kiddin' about the assassins too....

              ...or was I?



              Loston
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              • #22
                Originally posted by Bruce Lee View Post
                Oh yeah, I got that you were kidding. I was kiddin' about the assassins too....

                ...or was I?



                Loston
                Well if Ugga Bugga doesn't post in the next 2 days we'll know.

                Great work man I love the old school vibe you have going. Very solid work and I look forward to seeing more from you.
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