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    This character lends itself to some fun poses.
    http://pifalo.deviantart.com/

  • #2
    my only crit is the hands mate. I love the pose, the clean lines and the variety of weights.

    id like to see it with open hands as i think it would suit the pose better.

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    • #3
      Nice energy!

      I think you have two major anatomical errors happening though, both having to do with the hand positions.

      For example. We should be seeing the palm side of the hand instead of the back of it on that arm closest to us. The positioning of the bicep and the forearms dictate it. If you have the top side of the hand showing, the bicep would be pointed downward, and we would be seeing more of the topside of the forearm (We wouldn't be seeing the elbow at all).

      You've also got the thumb on the wrong side on his right hand (hand furthest from us).

      Fix those two things and you'd have a winner!
      Last edited by dfbovey; 08-22-2009, 03:10 PM.
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      • #4
        looks good, nice clean lines

        my crits is the arm in the front... its all kinds of f'd up...

        you rotate your forearm that much then you wouldn't see the inside of the arm where the bicep is... you'd see the top of the bicep pretty much upside down (facing down)...
        to prove my point.
        put your arm straight out perpendicular to your body (like he has) keep your fist with fingers facing the front of your body. note your you bicep stands straight up and you see the inside of your arm... now rotate your forarm down and around so that the fingers of your fist are now facing behind you... your bicep rotated with it and now faces toward your front and down.

        to fix this youd need to rework the whole shoulder and upper arm... but a easier solution would be just rotate the forearm so that were looking at the fist fingers forward.
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        • #5
          damn you dbovey for beating me..
          also nice catch on the thumb on the wrong side. i missed it.
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          • #6
            Holy crap, I didnt even notice the thumb on the right hand is on the wrong side! Haha.

            As far as the forward arm goes, I think I will flip that hand around so that the arm makes sense.

            Thanks for the crits guys.
            http://pifalo.deviantart.com/

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            • #7
              Okay, I updated the drawing to reflect some of you guys crits. Thanks so much for the help
              http://pifalo.deviantart.com/

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              • #8
                Wow what a difference opening the hands made! i really dig the pics. very dynamic!
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                • #9
                  I like the rendering.

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                  • #10
                    Excellent! Very eye catching.
                    Holla

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                    • #11
                      Thanks for the comments guys, and yeah, I think it looks better with the hands open too.
                      http://pifalo.deviantart.com/

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                      • #12
                        SO much better! Well done!
                        Cheers, Alex

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                        • #13
                          nice. Love the line quality, energy of the image. Top notch man.
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                          • #14
                            You have a real good grasp of the human form and great energy in you drawings. The only thing lacking is the lack of environment. I'd love to see some context to the characters. Where they are at, how is the environment affecting them and how are they affecting the environment. Great illustrations but they are still figures just floating in space. (at least thats what I get after browsing your Deviantart gallery)
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                            • #15
                              The foot that is in the highest position is funny. I think it's the heel. It should rest behind the leg.

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