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  • returncamelot
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    Originally posted by eric_blitz View Post
    Well I tried something new.../IMG]
    This is pretty good anatomy but your one point perspective needs work.

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  • eric_blitz
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    Yeah I'm starting to see what you mean by the anatomy being messed up. Something I struggle with big time.

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  • Popninja
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    Inking is a skill set that is separate from pencilling. You should really work on your pencilling; anatomy, composition, lighting, perspective, etc., before you jump into inking your own work.

    The background on this piece is wonky as all get out. And the pose your figure is in, no matter how you explain it, just looks bizarre.

    I agree with Anubis; this is a step in the right direction, as every time you put something down, you're taking a step toward improving. Keep drawing.

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  • eric_blitz
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    Also, do you all think I should darken the inking? Do you think that would help the picture??

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  • eric_blitz
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    Haunt is coming down from the top of a building. Jumping off. He's not on the side walk. Also, yeah I see what your saying about the vanashing point. Good point. The windows now bug the hell out of me now that you've said that lol,
    thanks for the advice bro!

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  • Anubis2kx
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    This is definitely a step in the right direction Eric.

    Two things though:
    The arm crossing doesn't really look natural. And is he floating/flying? I'm just asking because he doesn't look attached to the ground.
    And two, make sure you establish a vanishing point and stick with it. Right now, your sidewalk is different than your door, which are different than the bricks, and your two windows are on separate planes entirely.

    I do however like the face on the guy at the bottom...just wish I could see more of him. Good stuff and keep at it...your stuff is getting better.

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  • eric_blitz
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    Also, the reasion the inks arnt as dark as they normally are in my work, is when I tried to digitaly ink them, they messed up my lines. So I decided to settle. I might return to this peice and fix that.

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  • eric_blitz
    started a topic Haunt

    Haunt

    Well I tried something new, I've liked this character's design since I first saw it and I had to get it out of my system XD I really like how this turned out. I also tried what you guys here on penciljack have been telling me and added a big more action then I normally do. Hope you all like it!

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