Lutu, Warrior of the North

[James V. West]

I did this pin-up for Steve Coffin's comic Lutu.

This is an example of where I think my line weights work out ok. But others have criticized some of my art for having bad line weights so I'm wondering how this one plays out for folks.

[Wo-Nellie]

The line weights do add a certain chunkiness to the picture, coupled with the fact she's unusually girthy to begin with. If that's what you're going for great, if not you'll need to vary your line weights, with a heavy emphasis on slimming down a lot of the perimeter lines. The grass and sword however look fine to me with the heavier lines.

[NickRocks]

yummo. her shins are really short though.

[Toddoss]

Sassy, and Lord knows I like a woman with curves, but where's her chin?