Spider-girl redesign!

[Iwannabiscut]

Be harsh guys..XD i need the advice!

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

can't post blitz's inks only blitz can. Thems be the rules homes.

[Iwannabiscut]

SSSShhhhhh....dont let them hear you...and i helped him so technically its both of ours? isn't it?

[eric_blitz]

---erm---he means---he means he did them all himself---and I watched...? XD

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

oh you guys.

[eric_blitz]

I still think you should ad some background to it man. But nice work.

[Wo-Nellie]

Be harsh guys..XD i need the advice!

It certainly comes off looking very risque, some might even use harsher language.
I personally don't mind, having worn many a trashy outfit , but there are those who might have heart trouble especially over the "spider-bites" on her halter-top thingey.

[Iwannabiscut]

Haha well originally it was a joke between me and blitz...XD i said that i could make the best redesign and i made that...XD

[kae_ae]

naughty little spiders.

[Beastie]

You need to make sure that the 'dimensions of the anatomy' make sense across the entire body.

At present, her calf muscles are bigger and wider than her head.

Looking at the design itself, its a little busy for my tastes. That said I DO really like the idea of moving the spider motif onto her upper chest and round her neck like that. Its like a printed spider necklace/choker. Nice idea.

[Tecknic]

Ignoring the anatomy issues for the time being, I have to agree with Beastie that the costume is a little overly complicated. I don't mind all the skin showing (though I am a proponent of the classic "less is more" line of thinking), but the majority of the costume just screams style over practicality. The thumb and finger coverings in particular are incredibly unnecessary, and would likely take a bit of extra time to put on. Just covering the remaining bits of her hands with black spandex instead of leaving them as they are would likely solve this little issue, and would cover her fingers and, thus, not leave Spider-Girl fingerprints all over the place. I'm also not keen on the webbed eyemask. But, again parroting Beastie, I really think you've hit on something good with the spider choker thing. That part looks interesting.

So, all in all, it's a design that might fly in an AU of some kind. But it doesn't really strike me as something that would work in the current Marvel universe.

[eric_blitz]

Ignoring the anatomy issues for the time being, I have to agree with Beastie that the costume is a little overly complicated. I don't mind all the skin showing (though I am a proponent of the classic "less is more" line of thinking), but the majority of the costume just screams style over practicality. The thumb and finger coverings in particular are incredibly unnecessary, and would likely take a bit of extra time to put on. Just covering the remaining bits of her hands with black spandex instead of leaving them as they are would likely solve this little issue, and would cover her fingers and, thus, not leave Spider-Girl fingerprints all over the place. I'm also not keen on the webbed eyemask. But, again parroting Beastie, I really think you've hit on something good with the spider choker thing. That part looks interesting.

So, all in all, it's a design that might fly in an AU of some kind. But it doesn't really strike me as something that would work in the current Marvel universe.

I dissagree...almost completley. I think its remanesent of Ben Reylies Spider-Man suit and as for the gloves, they cover her entire hand. Just two fingers of the glove are webbed. I will agree it might not work in the current Mavel Universe. But it looks 90's to me. XD