Spider-Man VS Vulture VS Goblin. MJ VS gravity

[alfred183]

I think I'm going to call this done unless you guys see something waaaay out of place. Let me know what you think

[humblerthanyou]

I love this, Alfie! I especially like the... the.... shit, I can't remember the name of Gobby's bombs. I feel ashamed. The only things I see are that you should show more of one side of vultures face (doesn't matter which.) and the twip should be tilted. I thought it was a sign on a building at first.

[Dick Daniels]

That's right nice, feels like ya caught in the moment.

[dfbovey]

This turned out nice man! Was fun to watch it come together. Love the sense of drama you were able to convey.

I'll be finishing up mine after I get home from work. So I'll grab this and post up a poll as soon as I'm done.

[pencilartist]

That's the way to draw it. Nice concept and really action packed.

[paladis]

Amazing, astounding!

[Iwannabiscut]

Ha this is great! XD

[Tiger]

I love the composition of the picture but some of the anatomy seems a little off, but over all a nice picture.

-Tigs

[Spooko]

Great eye expression on Spiderman!

[firepunk626]

I love the composition of the picture but some of the anatomy seems a little off, but over all a nice picture.

agreed. Other than some of the anatomy issues this is an astounding, amazing, sensational piece

[dfbovey]

Hey Alfred, you asked for a little more harsher critiques in the voting thread, but I figured it would be more appropriate in here.

An example of something to look out for is how the position of a limb effects the muscles. Spidey's left arm with the webbing shooting out... has an issue with the position of the bicep. You have it pointing straight up, but with the arm and hand in that position it would be more to the side. Hold your arm in that position and you'll see what I mean. Or you could flip that hand palm up, and then the bicep position would make sense.

You've got a little bit of the same issue happening with Goblin's left arm.

Not really harsh, but points to think about for your next piece.

[J. Alexopoulos]

Daaaaaaaaamn!

[alfred183]

Oh, my god, Dave. I'm such a goober. You're completely right. I almost did the same thing in my PSF against Popninja. I'm going to go fix that now. and I'll fix it in the Spidey one as well. That's the stuff I'm looking for. Thanks

[Toddoss]

Great foreshortening!