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  • #2
    feels good, except the left arm. feels short.
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    • #3
      Left arm is definately a hair short, other then that pretty good. I like it lots
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      • #4
        Very nice, Musashi.
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        • #5
          Left arm looks fine, it's his right arm that looks short. Maybe if there was just a tiny hint of an elbow - just a small L or V shaped mark - it would clear that issue up.

          Very cool BTW.
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          • #6
            you may have a point.
            ‘There is a slower death/ bu-reau-crat/…….ruination/ mess up all that ambition and plannin’/ whisper in some ear/ -“You can’t do nothing to me”-/……-CLICK- ……/----whisper………in the right ear’----
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            • #7
              Nice use of negative space. I like the expression you gave him too. One thing that's bugging me, as I look at it right now, is the zig zag on the side of his forehead. That just doesn't look like it conveys the shape.

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              • #8
                dude that's ****ing awesome

                I love negative space like that.

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                • #9
                  Nicely done, I think just another hair of a line to indicate where those clip pouches are on belt. but looks cool to me.
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                  • #10
                    This is awesome. The arms are fine. The right arm coulsd have the shadow under the arm extend to the farthest point of his elbow to clear up the short arm issue, but it works fine as is. I love this piece - really excellent.
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                    • #11
                      too cool!!!!!!!1
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                      • #12
                        What Hades said. Don't mind the arm length comments, to my eyes it's obvious there's some shortening involved - they're both flexed after all and there's shadows to clue us in on that fact.

                        Great work.
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                        • #13
                          Hey, thanks for the comments all!

                          I'm actually pretty satisfied with this one so I don't think I'm going to go back and fix anything. I don't think either arm is too short at all. I could put more shadow under his right arm to define it a bit more but I like this effect better.

                          Thanks again guys.
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                          • #14
                            Very nice Punisher sketch.The Inking is very cool
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                            • #15
                              thats pretty sweet, keep up the good work!
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