Please read... I've started a book called Red Thunder

[SpideyRy]

Hi I've started writing a superhero book called Red Thunder. My idea is to finish one volume of the book and then start a comic about the hero Red Thunder.
If you wouldn't mind could you check out the book here - http://goo.gl/16oSH5
I'd really appreciate any feedback and your thoughts on the book.

[Tyrion]

I'm going to guess you're around 13 or 14 years old ... good effort, dude!

[amadarwin]

wrong forum. Moved.

[Ethan Kimbell]

@SpideyRy - Great book so far, dude! My Wattpad is EthanKimbell (no space). Check out somer of my stories. I'd love to adapt your story into a comic book script or even do some sketyches for you!
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