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    Alright folks, here it is, the official Brokenhill's Commie Zombies From Outer Space Thread.

    In here you will be able to see the (slow) process of this great community project. If you want to contribute, please send me a PM with what you are willing to do. We need pencilers, inkers, colorists and letterers. Just a few things to remember:

    1. If you can't do at least three pages of sequentials, please don't volunteer to do them. Anything less than three pages of consistant art is really bad for continuity. This goes for everyone. If you want to do a pin-up, that's cool but you're not beefing up your sequential portfolio with anything less than three pages anyway.

    2. You have a total of two weeks for three pages. Be honest with yourself and with me. If you can't do it in two weeks, don't volunteer.

    3. Pencilers: Thumbnails are due three days after you have signed up. After your thumbnails have been greenlit, that leaves you 9 days to finish the pages. There may be some adjustments to make before they are greenlit and that's why I'm giving it the 2 week window. If you ink and color your art yourself I can give you a few extra days but no more than three.

    I will be posting scripts as soon as I write them down. In the meantime, the description of the story, the character guide sheets and the art so far are as follows:
    Last edited by fatmancomics; 01-16-2011, 11:07 PM.
    Commie Zombies From Outer Space
    My art thread
    http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge...itle_no=144890

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    The story and prologue:

    The time is 2069 ,Its been 9 years scents the Commie Zombie’s came from outer space.They came by the thousand’s landing on all parts of the earth.Some nations welcomed them big mistake They overran them that much more easily .Most nations that fought, fought hard ,but it was almost a complete losing battle.The US had to move all its government to California that was president schwarzenegger decree .There they built a huge wall and any citizens that could make were told to make there way in before it was too late. This process repeated it self over and over the world as nations backed them selves into corners like frighten animals.
    But out there outside the walls were groups of people ,Hard ass people that weren’t going to be pushed around,That said enough is enough.And they fought back.
    With everything they had.
    This is their story .

    How the CZFOS came to be .

    It was 1969 and while the US pursued the dream of getting to the moon.the Soviets Union followed theirs .
    Slowly ,little be little . Every time the sent up a “satellite “
    It was in realty a frozen cosmonaut .after they had 20 cosmonauts orbiting the earth they put the second part of there plan into effect.all the ship’s merged into one huge ship .And off it went Towards A distant planet only the soviets had found.
    Little did the frozen cosmonauts know what lay ahead.
    When the ship crashed landed on the planet of Zombies.
    At first they feared for there lives.After all seeing 9ft tall half dead zombies walking around can scare the shit out of ya. Soon they were brought before the leaders.And
    That’s when the began the tale of how and why the had
    Arrived on the world.But what most intrigued the leaders
    Was how Communism worked .And at that they marveled
    The most .almost instantly they reworked the society to be a perfect model of Communism . The crew cooperated fully with the remolding of their society .And when it was done Cosmonauts sat back and smiled for it soo beautiful to them.But their happiness’ was short lived .
    The leaders hungered for for more,More than the could have ever dreamed of in their worst nightmares. They wanted to know about Earth and its billon’s of inhabitants .That’s when they hatched there invasion plan.

    The cast of characters:

    “ The Norseman” 7’ 7” of Nordic Knockdown. Huge brute of a man .Think , Doc savage meets Thor.Use a 900lb ship anchor chain as weapon.

    “The Canuck” mysterious man from what used to be
    Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.

    “ BRUCE” master of Jeet -kon -do .two robotic forearms. Think karnak meets the Cybog guy from teen-titians(comic book) uses Nanotec nun- chucks. 100.000 volts shots though them.And it turns on and off evertime the touch his hands or body.
    “Guardian Angel” Transformer type with huge wings.
    She slash the CZ with these .She gives them Salvation ,Right too HELL.

    “Techno Demon” He’s got that grin ,That says TIME TO DIE!. Has A army of small and larger robots that do his biding. Fav saying “ SMEG” wears a modified out back duster.lot’s of internal pockets.

    “ Jarhead + Drifter”
    Jarhead’s the MARINE .Born again Hard.Drives a 6ton
    Hardened Military wrecker .With twin 20mil cannons on the roof.
    “Drifter” is Jarhead's nephew. Street tuff Crazy ass good driver. Think the TRANSPORTER meets Fast a Furious.
    Armour plated tuner with ground effects and twin 30 cal s Also lays mines.

    "The Fat Man". Weapons designer who claims responsibility for the mechanical army that holds the Commie Zombies at bay. His most commonly known creation is the Guardian Angels. Techno Demon claims the Fat Man stole most of his patents from him and this creates constant tension between the two. The Fat Man never leaves the safety of California.

    The art so far:

    Cover (art by Brokenhill)



    Prologue (art by KrisDiaz)



    Last edited by fatmancomics; 05-13-2011, 07:30 PM.
    Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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    • #3


      Pages 1 and 2 (art by Brokenhill):





      Last edited by fatmancomics; 01-09-2010, 09:25 PM.
      Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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      • #4
        Pages 4 through 6 (Scamarooney art):





        Last edited by fatmancomics; 01-18-2011, 12:49 AM.
        Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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        • #5
          Descriptions and guide sheets:





          “The Canuck” mysterious man from what used to be
          Canada.Fly around in a cross between a Apache copter and a tank.




          Last edited by fatmancomics; 03-30-2011, 09:09 PM.
          Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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          • #6
            “Jarhead and Drifter”
            Jarhead'’s the MARINE .Born again Hard.Drives a 6ton
            Hardened Military wrecker .With twin 20mil cannons on the roof.
            “Drifter” is Jarhead's nephew. Street tuff Crazy ass good driver. Think the TRANSPORTER meets Fast a Furious.
            Armour plated tuner with ground effects and twin 30 cal s Also lays mines.










            Last edited by fatmancomics; 03-30-2011, 09:07 PM.
            Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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            • #7
              Last edited by fatmancomics; 01-31-2010, 11:55 PM.
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              • #8
                Last edited by fatmancomics; 02-01-2010, 01:42 AM.
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                • #9
                  Guardian Angels: These mechanical angels are part of an army of robots arguably designed by the fat man and built in California.







                  Some notes on the Commie Zombies: The tubes that are connected directly to the head are feeding the brain blood. The blood spikes are hollow, metal tubes that feed the blood into the suit and the suit has a blood distribution mechanism. Once the brain has been collected and the side chambers are filled with blood (so that the brain can be kept fresh), the suit sends the rest of the blood to the commie zombie in order to keep its brain alive.
                  The tubes behind the head in the helmet are communication speakers for commands given to the zombies by the Zombas.
                  Also, breaking the zombie's helmet does not kill them. They still need to have their brain destroyed in order to be killed.
                  Last edited by fatmancomics; 03-30-2011, 09:13 PM.
                  Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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                  • #10
                    I will make guide sheets ASAP. For now, here are Bruce:



                    and Techno Demon:

                    Last edited by fatmancomics; 06-26-2011, 11:13 PM.
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                    • #11
                      The script:

                      Page 4: 4 panels

                      Panel 1: Long shot of Jarhead and Drifter's vehicles along with 20 civilians surrounded by one hundred commie zombies. Jarhead, Drifter and the few civilians who are armed have filled in the gaps between the two vehicles and are holding off the zombies while the rest of the civilians huddle between the vehicles.
                      Jarhead: (into an ear piece) …Came to protect some lost “civies” in New York and got bogged down. Could use some assistance before our ammo runs low.

                      Panel 2: Up shot of The Canuck's tank copter flying in to the rescue.
                      Canuck: (from inside tank copter) Copy that, good buddy. I’ll clear the outside perimeter before landing.

                      Panel 3: The Canuck’s tank copter, seen from a ¾ view, machine guns down a good chunk of the commie zombies surrounding the vehicles.

                      Panel 4: Close up of The Canuck as he fires his guns. He is screaming into his headset.
                      Canuck: Get some!


                      Page 5: 5 Panels

                      Panel 1: ¾ view of The Canuck’s tank copter again but this time with Max’s flying spider in view on the other side of the group of civilians.
                      Max: (from inside the flying spider) Somebody call a gardener?

                      Panel 2: The flying spider swoops low and cuts the heads off of another chunk of the commie zombie group before landing.
                      Max: (from inside the flying spider) There’s some weeds that won’t be coming back!

                      Panel 3: Shot of a Guardian Angel flying low and dropping Brokenhill’s 4x4 Javelin.
                      Brokenhill: (from inside the Javelin) IT’S CLOBBERIN’ TIME!

                      Panel 4: Perspective shot of the Javelin pummeling through a dense group of commie zombies. Some zombies can be seen flying through the air as the Javelin speeds forward.
                      Brokenhill: Sunday! Sunday! Sunday!

                      Panel 5: Perspective shot of the Guardian Angel flying through the commie zombies. Her wings are slicing off heads on either side of her. She is essentially doing the same thing that Max was doing with the flying spider. The group of heroes has now surrounded the zombies and are thinning the herd from the outside in.



                      Page 6: Splash Page. It is a long shot of the aftermath. All the commie zombies are dead save the one being shot in the head by Drifter.
                      Drifter: And that’s how it’s done…
                      SFX: Ka-pow!
                      Last edited by fatmancomics; 04-29-2011, 01:35 AM.
                      Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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                      • #12
                        Page 7: 5 Panels

                        Panel 1: The civilians have dispersed and the heroes have gathered together between their vehicles. It is an informal pow-wow.
                        Brokenhill: Alright, who’s on cadaver detail?
                        Max: Dad, there are no cadavers.

                        Panel 2: Most of the heroes are shocked by Max’s announcement. They should be shown with incredulous looks on their faces. Only Jarhead and Drifter, who were there before the rest arrived, are not surprised.
                        Jarhead: They were abducting them, Brokenhill. They managed to get away with five before we arrived.

                        Panel 3: Still in the huddle, the heroes take turns hypothesizing.
                        Canuck: But why would they do that? They only attack to replenish their blood and brain tanks. Do you think they’re making more zombies?

                        Panel 4: The Guardian Angel speaks for the first time. Her voice, though feminine, is still computerized.
                        Guardian Angel: Gentlemen, although I am currently scrambling any possible signals that could intrude on our conversation, it is still not safe to gather here for so long. Perhaps a formal meeting is in order.

                        Panel 5:
                        Brokenhill: Right, can you get word to everyone else and have them meet us at area 57 in one week?
                        Guardian Angel: Yes, sir.
                        Brokenhill: Alright, let’s get what we can and get the hell out of here. I’ll see you gentlemen in one week.

                        Page 8 will be the pencils that Morganza has already done as the following pages will be the Guardian Angels gathering the troops (see below).





                        Page 9: 4 Panels

                        Panel 1: As The Norseman turns, a Commie Zombie is coming out of the woods, reaching for him.

                        Panel 2: The Norseman punches the CZ’s helmet, forcing the CZ’s head to whiplash as the glass on its helmet shatters.

                        Panels 3 and 4: The Norseman then quickly picks up two pieces of the wood he has been “chopping” and smashes the CZ’s head between them, splattering brains and blood in the process.

                        Page 10: 4 Panels

                        Panel 1: Two black silhouettes that look like Commie Zombies are seen in the foreground as the CZ that The Norseman has just destroyed falls to the ground.

                        Panel 2: The Norseman quickly turns around again and they are indeed Commie Zombies but their helmets have been cracked and there are holes clean through their skulls.

                        Panel 3: The CZs fall to ground and a Guardian Angel stands behind them.

                        Panel 4: The Guardian Angel is still behind the fallen CZs.
                        Guardian Angel: Greetings, Norseman. You are summoned for an official meeting at Area 57 in 6 days.


                        Page 11: 3 Panels

                        Panel 1: Close-up shot of a Commie Zombie’s helmet and head.

                        Panel 2: The same CZ’s head is now whip lashing backwards, the glass in its helmet breaking into pieces as one of Bruce’s nunchaku hits it. There is a twin trail of electricity wrapped around the CZ’s head and leading into the prongs at the tip of the nunchaku.
                        SFX: Skressh!

                        Panel 3: Half splash of Bruce taking out three more CZs around him as the one that we saw in the previous panels falls backwards, smoke emitting from its charred head. His actions are so quick that Bruce should only be drawn in outlines for each hit. All the Commie Zombies should be shown with their heads whipping backwards, their helmets shattering and electricity surrounding their heads. Think of the scene where Spidey kicks the Kingpin’s butt in jail in the TPB The Road To Hell for inspiration.
                        Bruce: (a different word balloon for each hit) Whaaa! Oowah! Ayaah!
                        SFX: (at each of the CZ’s helmets as they break) Skrish! Skresh! Skrash!


                        Page 12: 4 Panels

                        Panel 1: Worm’s eye view of Bruce standing over the bodies of the Commie Zombies, their heads still smoking. Bruce is standing in New York’s Chinatown and a Guardian Angel’s silhouette can be seen behind him in the sky. A Guardian Angel is landing and Bruce is looking up to see her.
                        Mechangel: Hello, Bruce.
                        Bruce: (in “icy” word balloon) shitballs

                        Panel 2: The Guardian Angel has landed and is standing directly in front of Bruce. Bruce should have a look of disdain towards the Guardian Angel. He does not like the Guardian Angels and is paranoid that they can be reprogrammed against the heroes at any time.
                        Guardian Angel: You are summoned to an emergency meeting 6 days from now at the usual place.
                        Bruce: You know I don’t take messages directly from you, automaton. Show me the hologram or go jump in a lake.

                        Panel 3: Full shot of Bruce and the Guardian Angel standing in front of each other, Bruce’s back is to the viewer. The Angel is emitting a hologram from her eyes a la Star Wars. The hologram is of the Fatman and, like in Star Wars, should allow us to see the Guardian Angel behind it.
                        Fatman: (in a square word balloon with “electric” pointer to show that it sounds scratchy) Bruce, you paranoid bastard. Meet us at the usual place in six days... They've started abducting people.

                        Panel 4: Bruce has a look of surprise on his face.
                        Bruce: Why would they take people?
                        Guardian Angel: Several hypothesis have been-
                        Bruce: That was rhetorical, tin can! Now get the hell out of here before you call attention to yourself!

                        Page 13:

                        Panel 1: A small compartment in Bruce's right arm pops open and he speaks into it.
                        Bruce: Crane, one to pick up.

                        Panel 2: Full shot of a small, one man jet plane decending onto where Bruce is standing. It is the Crane, Bruce's vehicle.

                        Panel 3: Still a full shot but this time the Crane is on the ground with the canopy open. Bruce is hopping inside.
                        Bruce: Abduction...

                        Panel 4: Shot of the Crane leaving the scene. There should be a city scape behind it to still hint that he is in NY.
                        Bruce: (from inside the plane, unseen) ...shitballs.


                        Page 14: 6 Panels

                        Panel 1: Close up shot of a pair of booted feet running, speed lines in the background.

                        Panel 2: Full shot of Techno Demon running into an alley. Four CZs are behind him, their arms outstretched towards him.

                        Panel 3: Full profile shot of Techno Demon stopping abruptly as he comes to the back wall of the alley. It is a dead end.

                        Panel 4: Techno Demon, his back against the wall and arms outstretched on the bricks, looks left and right.

                        Techno Demon: Damn!

                        Panel 5: Techno Demon is now in a power stance, his chin tucked into his chest to show mischief.

                        Techno Demon: I was hoping to get more of you in here but you lot will have to do.

                        Panel 6: Techno Demon opens his trench coat and countless robotic spiders fly out of it, each with a small version of his helmet on their head.

                        Page 15: 5 Panels

                        Panel 1: Half shot of the CZs as they are overwhelmed by the robot spiders. They should appear cringing and confused by what is happening. They thought they had an easy target when Techno Demon ran into the alley.

                        Panel 2: Close up of the robot spiders on the CZs. They are biting the hulls of the CZs and sparks are coming out of their fangs as they do so. Techno Demon narrates.

                        Caption: That’s the worst type of venom...

                        Panel 3: Another close up of the robot spiders as they bite on the hull of another CZ.

                        Caption: The type that goes viral.

                        Panel 4: Full shot of the CZs standing almost at attention with Techno Demon standing in front of them. The CZs have stopped struggling and the robot spiders are crawling off of them and back into Techno Demon’s trench coat.

                        Techno Demon: There’s my good lads. Now…


                        Panel 5: Full shot of the CZs coming out of the alley, arms stretched out. Tehno Demon must be seen behind them in perspective, pointing forwards as he yells his command.

                        Techno Demon (in jagged word balloon to show he’s yelling): KILL ALL COMMIE ZOMBIES FROM OUTER SPACE!

                        Page 16: 3 Panels

                        Panel 1: Half splash view of a city street overrun by CZs. People are fleeing to and from every direction. Some CZs have abductees over each shoulder and those that do not are actively hunting them down. Techno Demon’s CZs can be seen hurrying into the melee with Techno Demon running behind them. The background should show that this was once Washington D.C. Perhaps the Washington monument can be shown in the background.

                        Panel 2: Techno Demon’s CZs disperse and two of them immediately use their brain spikes to kill one CZ each.

                        SFX (for each of the two CZs that are being killed): Krish! Kresh!

                        Panel 3: Techno Demon is running towards the mayhem himself, leaving behind his other two CZs as they each grab a CZ and kill them as the prior two did.

                        SFX (again for each CZ being killed by their infected comrades): Kresh! Krish!
                        Techno Demon: Get them, my pretties!


                        Page 17: 5 Panels


                        Panel 1: Techno Demon takes out two discs that hold four blades each out of his trench coat while still running towards the melee.

                        Panel 2: Dramatic angle and perspective of Techno Demon throwing the discs.

                        Panel 3: Close up of the discs in the air as they begin to spin like saws.

                        SFX: WhirrrrrzzzzZZZZZ!


                        Panel 4: The saws cut through the glass helmets of two CZs like butter and decapitate them in the process. The saws should be shown behind the decapitated heads, still spinning and having lost no momentum.

                        SFX: SCHLACK! SCHLACK!

                        Panel 5: The saws continue decapitating CZs as they zip through the air. It is up to the artist how many zombies are shown being decapitated.



                        Page 18: 5 Panels

                        Panel 1: Half shot of three rows of CZs that are carrying abductees.

                        Panel 2: As they stand at attention, wings eject from unseen compartments on their backs.

                        SFX: WhirrrrCLACK!


                        Panel 3: Full shot of the same row of CZs. Smoke is being emitted from the bottom of their boots.

                        Panel 4: The CZs take off row after row.

                        SFX: FFFWOOSH!

                        Panel 5: Shot of Techno Demon as he looks on in disbelief.

                        Techno Demon: What the f-?! They can fly now?!


                        Page 19: 6 Panels.

                        Panel 1: Shot of Techno Demon slumping, looking defeated.

                        Techno Demon: All those people…

                        Panel 2: A small robot spider crawl out of Techno Demon’s trench coat.

                        Panel 3: The spider’s eyes emit a hologram of the Fatman in front of Techno Demon and TD looks up as it gets his attention.

                        Fatman: Techno Demon!

                        Panel 4: Techno Demon’s posture is now confrontational. He points a finger at the hologram.

                        Techno Demon: Goddamnit, Fatman! How many times do I have to tell you not to hack into my robots?!

                        Panel 5: The Fatman’s hologram answers. Techno Demon has put his hand down but is still in a confrontational posture.

                        Fatman: You don’t really leave me much choice. It’s not like I can send a Guardian Angel into the center of New Moscow.

                        Techno Demon: I think you mean a Tech Angel.

                        Panel 6: Front shot of the Fatman’s hologram. He can be shown rolling his eyes at TD.

                        Fatman: We don’t have time for that old squabble. The zombies have started abducting people. We’re rounding up the troops and meeting at the usual place. Be there in 6 days.
                        Last edited by fatmancomics; 09-26-2017, 02:51 PM.
                        Commie Zombies From Outer Space
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                        • #13
                          All I can say is your doing a fantastic job with this.I like the way your writing this.


                          Originally posted by fatmancomics View Post
                          Page 7: 5 Panels

                          Panel 1: The civilians have dispersed and the heroes have gathered together between their vehicles. It is an informal pow-wow.
                          Brokenhill: Alright, who’s on cadaver detail?
                          Max: Dad, there are no cadavers.

                          Panel 2: Most of the heroes are shocked by Max’s announcement. They should be shown with incredulous looks on their faces. Only Flavor and KD, who were there before the rest arrived, are not surprised.
                          Flavor: They were abducting them, Brokenhill. They managed to get away with five before we arrived.

                          Panel 3: Still in the huddle, the heroes take turns hypothesizing.
                          Lost Spartan: But why would they do that? They only attack to replenish their blood and brain tanks. Do you think they’re making more zombies?

                          Panel 4: Mechangel speaks for the first time. Her voice, though feminine, is still computerized.
                          Mechangel: Gentlemen, although I am currently scrambling any possible signals that could intrude on our conversation, it is still not safe to gather here for so long. Perhaps a formal meeting is in order.

                          Panel 5:
                          Brokenhill: Alright, can you get word to everyone else and have them meet us at area 57 in one week?
                          Mechangel: Yes, sir.
                          Brokenhill: Alright, let’s get what we can and get the hell out of here. I’ll see you gentlemen in one week.

                          Page 8 will be the pencils that Morganza has already done as the following pages will be Mechangel gathering the troops (see below).


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                          • #14
                            Thanks. Here's hoping we get a volunteer who's not intimidated by Morgan's art. Also, here's hoping we get volunteers to ink, color and letter this sucker. Bruce Lee's introduction is next.
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                            • #15
                              Fatman thoses new pages are so cool,Damn man you got a great imagination .I really(yes damnit) wish I had some time to draw some of this.
                              But to me you are really bring this to life.Nice work!
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