Batman or bust

[pigeonmilk]

little wip, got bored at work and am trying out a new batman bust


By pigeonmilk, shot with VX-9700 at 2009-10-26

[DogSoldier]

Looking good ,,it's got a Jim Lee look to it .

[pigeonmilk]

thanks DS, Lee was a huge inspiration on my when i was a teenager.

[slyaguilar]

Looks cool so far, the right arm is too low, or his torso is too large but something is def off or maybe it's me....I dunno. Keep at it, I would like to see it finished!

[pigeonmilk]

Thanks.

Its the damn camera. its at a slight skewed angle when I took it. I looked at the pic on my table then at this one and noticed that the body looks longer.....

[pigeonmilk]

some more farting around with this pic

By pigeonmilk, shot with VX-9700 at 2009-10-26

[Eric Henson]

Nice pencil-work! This Batman has a great feel to it and it looks like adding the S.A. muscles and obliques help to cover that huge space of the ribs. His torso still looks a bit massive, but overall this is extremely cool!

I look forward to seeing the completed drawing!

[Spidey]

Your update on the ribcage is a little contradictory. Usually the heavy shaded part you have set for the stomach falls right under the ribcage. As it is it looks like he has 2 separate ribcages. I would try to merge the abs with the heavy shaded area on his stomach.

[Eric Henson]

Your update on the ribcage is a little contradictory. Usually the heavy shaded part you have set for the stomach falls right under the ribcage. As it is it looks like he has 2 separate ribcages. I would try to merge the abs with the heavy shaded area on his stomach.

Spidey's right.

[pigeonmilk]

I see watcha mean!

I was trying to add some shading and depth to the middle abs and looking at it after that comment would mean that he has super control of his abs which would not be correct with that flexing.

I should shade further down on the abs.

thanks!