Spidey, considering the circumstances you still have a really nice pic. good job mate.
Anthony, I am loving that perspective, you pulled that off nicely. makes mine feel flat in comparasion.
Topic: Peter Parker (Spiderman in any costume) vs Ben Reilly (Spiderman/Spidercarnage/Scarlet Spider)
Anthony ANMPH Hary
Okay ... so this just has to be it for me ... things slid down hill last night. So I just have to be done at this point.
Pigeon, Anthony ... you guys hit this out of the park ... and you both have all of my respect for your compassion and class.
I can tell you what mine is missing...dynamics...and my line weights are too weak as well. damn I gotta pay attention to that.
I wasn't happy with the pose and agains those buildings its just flat.
I should had pushed the angle with the bg. Anthony nailed the emotion along with a good perspective pulled it off. If he could had finished the details, that would had been a total ass beating for us.
Shawn great piece luv the action! pigeonmilk u got some nice stuff goin on in yours too(maybe the inks flattened it too much i know my inks always kill my pencils) but Anthony u got the great perspective that shows the feelin of falling and i like your lil cars!
im using rapidograph pens for inking and they suck for creating lineweight naturally.
Thanks for the info DB, I totally see what you mean, and I think that was a huge problem here on this peice for me.