Figure help needed

[jedi34567]

Need some help with the foreshortening of the torso and the right arm here (and anything else you see wrong :-) ):

[Bryan E.Warner]

Hey Paul
this is not too bad..on the torso I'd loose that little bulge thats under the chest.trimming it down I think would do the trick..on your right arm it's pulled back and away not too wonky I'm thinking where the arm is bending could be a little more...think of a cylinder.( I know you've done this before with maybe a Football reference )
Does any of that help or make sense?

[mikeljanin]

Like this?

[Bryan E.Warner]

I think Mike's on to it

[jedi34567]

Update:

[paladis]

Looks better with the adjustments The back arm looks correct now.

[jedi34567]

Now I just have to figure out now to get it right in the first place. :-,