View Poll Results: Whose Spidey is blacker? ;P

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  • steve11jr

    25 51.02%
  • StrayTangent

    24 48.98%
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Thread: PSF: steve11jr vs StrayTangent: Black Costume Spiderman

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    PSF: steve11jr vs StrayTangent: Black Costume Spiderman

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    Hey nice job guys .

    Steve11jr way to come out of the gates running man . Full color and all . Very nice

    Stray T I love that fight sequence and the back ground very nicely done , I would like to see you in keeping with your style but work out some of the shapes more defined . This piece would really sing then .

    All said I got to go with Stray T
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    Stray I really like that its got very nice flow to it but Spidey blends in with the background far too much. Still got my vote though.
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    steve, you piece is the cleanest and most finished, but has the most issues. Some perspective issues with the buildings, and that webslinging hand isn't working, it alsso would've added more dynamics if you would've drawn that in foreshortening into the camera.
    StrayTangent: You're piece looks like it's done in paint or some online drawing website. But the drawing itself kicks ass. It's super dynamic with some poses I think I would've had trouble drawing. Except for the guy lying on the floor. Still invest some time in rendering this better, try it in pencils or ink it.
    Still I had to give it to Tangent because it's really dynamic, if you guys would've worked together with steve rendering the image this would've been brilliant
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    Nice piece Stray, I really like Spidey's pose. Cool idea

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    go Steve!!!

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    Neck n' neck.

    Interesting choice for composition. I'm assuming you made the angle diagonal to make it more dynamic, but personally, I feel it would've been more fun and odd to have spidey perpendicular to the wall. By angling it, you lose the coolness of showing spidey running perpendicular and make it more ambiguous as to what he's running on.

    I had somewhat of a similar idea for my initial sketch, having spidey stand straight up on the wall, so that he'd be parallel to the ground staring down at the crooks.

    Maybe your scene is the one preceding mine. ;P

    Good effort, man.

    If I seem like I'm rambling I apologize. Got back from a 12+ hour shift at work and it's too nice a day out to go to sleep. =)

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    Yeah I went through a lot of sketches before I settled on this one. I even had an idea of using this as a ref pic and having the girl be Mary Jane and having spiderman swinging down in fury in the background. But I decided to jus focus on Spiderman in the end.


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