Gen 13

[ink4884]

[Scott_S]

Got Dam! Slick pages.

[KrisDiaz]

your style here reminds me a bit of paco medina's run on new x-men, any chance of doing a couple of new x-men sample pages?

[davechisholm]

haha coffee talk!
the pages look good, although the guy's arms in the relaxed pose look a bit too flexed. usually when i relax with my arms behind my head, they aren't THAT far behind my head.

[ink4884]

haha coffee talk!
the pages look good, although the guy's arms in the relaxed pose look a bit too flexed. usually when i relax with my arms behind my head, they aren't THAT far behind my head.

great crit! just tried it myself and yeah it's hard pose to pull off with hurting and not acutally relaxing.

[autowagon]

the drawing on these i don't like so much, are they older? the layout on the last couple pages is pretty kick ass though. Don't get me wrong its still pretty good. Panel 4 on the last page, what is it?

[ink4884]

the drawing on these i don't like so much, are they older? the layout on the last couple pages is pretty kick ass though. Don't get me wrong its still pretty good. Panel 4 on the last page, what is it?

haha i believe her eye. Thanks for the crit i think it's hat i needed.

[ninja216]

The very last panel her chest and arms bother me, her chest/ribs seem to be a t one pose, the rest at another, her amrs are strange because the arm further away isn't very noticeable...but I really like this other than that

[jdmakescomics]

Nice. You draw really cute girls. The environment stuff is nice, too. It took me a bit to understand what was going on in panels 3-5 on page one, though. Maybe if the waitress was a bit more clearly established in panel 3, she just kinda seemed to appear in panel 4.