Captain Marvel....Help!

[NickRocks]

so, this is what i got going on so far. CnC always appreciated!

[Wo-Nellie]

I don't see what you need help with here NickGuy, it looks pretty good as a frame sketch, easy to tell our boy is out front with another flyer tailing just behind.
Decently set-up composition.

[F!]

easy to tell our boy is out front with another flyer tailing just behind.

I'm reading it as looking down on Billy from above as he cries "Shazam!" and then Captain Marvel flying up at us.

[NickRocks]

thats what im aiming for...billys yelling shazam! with big letters under him, and captain marvel is flying up at us..

[Wo-Nellie]

Ok, my bad.

[ntat]

I don't see what you need help with here NickGuy, it looks pretty good as a frame sketch, easy to tell our boy is out front with another flyer tailing just behind.
Decently set-up composition.

i agree. as far as the frame work goes, ur set up is nice. i cant say anything needs to be changed or added yet. looks good nick!

[dxdragon]

Yeah...right now it's to much in a framing mode to really help beyond comp....which looks really nice.

[NickRocks]

alright, this piece is going everywhere, but i dont feel like its...exciting enough. i took it to paper...



but i wasnt feeling it so i tried digital..



idk...feedback, please? i feel like this could be...i dunno, BETTER. im scared of johnny blaque haha

[NickRocks]

working on some blacks, getting a feel of how i want to do this

[jdmakescomics]

I'd take away Billy's jowls and just round out the bottom of the face. It'd just be a little longer since his mouth is that open. Marvel looks nice.