First Comic styled drawing in a LONG time

**atebitninja** · 06-18-2009, 10:30 PM

I've been out of the loop on comic book styled art. Decided to sketch something up. I wanted thick and alluring. Not happy with the gun so I'm going to have to re-approach it before I hit it up with inks. I also wish I had put something on her right arm to balance out the left leg...

Character design is mine. Sorry about the bad "scan" as all I have is a digital camera.

It's been at least 4 years since I did anything in this style so any crits would be helpful.

**Wo-Nellie** · 06-18-2009, 11:51 PM

Welcome back to the fold man.

It's pretty good, well better than good actually.
Just breezing over it really fast you don't notice anything particularly wrong with her, but on a slower and closer inspection a few things leap to attention, such as the gun and her awkward grasp on it starting from the wrist area. I'm going to write off her shoulders as more of a stylistic choice than an error, however the placement of her hips I'm not so sure about.
One of the artists around here might be able to explain better than I can about the hips.