very beautifully rendered illustrations canaan. panel 3 seems slightly obsolete to me, not really necassary in my opinion. i notice in panel 2 you have an exit sign above the door, yet omited it in panel 3...any reason? also panel 4, i would redraw the head of the guy facing us, it too closely resembles the 'main' character we are watching, and since he is looking directly at the viewer he also distracts us... make him face forward. having movement among the crowd is great, but you dont want to confuse the reader.
cant wait to see more.