Halo 3: ODST finally finished!

[krikkit13]

I started this a looong time ago and posted it in the sketch lab. I got some excellent crits, but only just got around to finishing it up. I've made a few changes based on the crits given - hopefully they're all for the better!

Hit me up with crits and comments please!



Tools: Manga Studio, Photoshop, Illustrator

[dfbovey]

Really awesome job on this! You're really developing a really distinct style and I like it.

Love the colors and textures.

[Spidey]

Everything looks good. I like the background texture.

[krikkit13]

Thanks for checking it out guys. I'm pretty happy with the direction my art is going in right now, so I'm glad that the style is resonating with people.

[MC Fumunda]

I think my only crit would be his ear. A quick fix there and this is a fantastic illustration.

I'm a big fan of your work, man. It's been cool watching you develop.

[krikkit13]

Thanks Matty.

The ear looks off to me too - is it too far back, and up a bit too high?

[riq]

Great piece..

The structure on the face is a little off, but overall the piece is great ( and I think you could fix the face pretty quickly)

riq.

[Teratophile]

alright...you're going to have to teach me how to make bold ink/color decisions.

awesome man.

[krikkit13]

Thanks for looking guys, I appreciate it.

Can someone elaborate a bit on the problems with the face? I'd like to fix it, or at least know for the future...

[DogSoldier]

Great looking pic , love the colors .

The face seems off on his left side , the cheek bone , top lip and chin area looks to be sagging down + weak. The bags under the eyes seem overdone ,, they are really wrinkled + puffed up .

His face seems to be a mix of youth and an old man depending on what part your looking at .