Ninja Baby.

[Paradox]

Hey guys. Here's another quick ten pager I did for sore thumb press.

Any and all feedback welcomed.

[Beastie]

Much clearer story-wise than the crazy moose pages -- but I'm not sure you made enough of the babies initial transformation into the ninja baby. The panels showing the arrival of the guru guy - and little panel of the baby in full ninja garb just aren't explosive enough. You mis-fire over that transformation - because the big, blockbuster panel follows on the next page - when we've already been shown that the baby has transformed.

Thats how I see it anyway.

The 'baby' doesn't really look like a baby on the last page. That chiselled jaw and perfectly formed hairstyle make him look more like a style conscious teenager than a baby. I'd have expected more rounded features and tousled, slightly unruly hair.

One thing that struck me as being obscenely odd - was that this house just happens to have a table of some sort being suspended from the living room ceiling? Where did that come from??

Aside from that, I really like the page where the ninja baby delivers his punches to the burglars - and the spiked dummy is a great idea!!

[Wo-Nellie]

The table (bed?) appears to be a trap set up by the baby to crush the burglar. However, Beastie may mean that we didn't see it previously in the other panels, so it just sort of jumped into the scene without any set-up.

[J & S Harrington]

I like your art. It really fits this style of story. Good job!

-S

[hardcore]

like the storytelling