Don't do it Fred!!!

**Moonwildflower** · 03-30-2009, 03:26 PM

Found an old comic that a friend and I had thought up. Based on a fabricated true story. Might post more of the pages later.

**m.philips** · 03-30-2009, 04:32 PM

i like this. simple but good. you should post the whole thing.
my only crit is that, since both characters look the same and there are close-ups, i had to read it through a few times to realize who was saying what. maybe you could put distinct word balloons for each character or something.

**J. Alexopoulos** · 03-30-2009, 04:50 PM

funny stuff.

**tekende** · 03-30-2009, 06:26 PM

I don't get it. Is there a joke here?

**RavioliDog** · 03-30-2009, 06:28 PM

Originally Posted by tekende

I don't get it. Is there a joke here?

I agree.

You also spelled dying wrong.

**Moonwildflower** · 03-30-2009, 07:51 PM

I tried to post the whole thing, but the forum would only let me post three. And yes, there is a joke here. You figure it out in the end. Not sure how to continue, should I post the rest of the pages here? Or should I open a new topic?
And thank you for the idea about the different speech bubbles. I'll try that.

**Turtle Boat** · 03-30-2009, 08:55 PM

man this is hillarious!!! well, i don't get the joke at the end, i just thought two bird eggs contemplating suicide to be funny by itself. You should definitely post more.

**ScottEwen** · 03-31-2009, 09:09 AM

Originally Posted by Moonwildflower

I tried to post the whole thing, but the forum would only let me post three. And yes, there is a joke here. You figure it out in the end. Not sure how to continue, should I post the rest of the pages here? Or should I open a new topic?

You can post as many pages at one time as you want, you just need to reply to your first message and post three more pages, and keep doing that until they're all up. However, once they've received critiques you need to open a new thread for all subsequent pages.