The Dog Ate It.

[Paradox]

Hey guys.

This is something the wife and I were going to colour up and submit to a local comic book company, but abandoned the project when we moved onto another idea.

The concept for this strip was that every week, the dog would show up and get the kid (Kyle) into trouble and no one would belive him.



Any and all feedback welcomed.

G.

[ArmstrongArts]

It is cute. not really in my ballpark enough to critique it very well, so I won't. I will say the storytelling looks good to ma and I like the placement of the characters. You can see them well and tell what they are doing and the lettering doesn't block any of the narative.

[Paradox]

Thanks Man.