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    Storm Rifle

    A sketch I did at work:



    I'm making an effort to (as much as possible) avoid drawing anything exactly side on or dead on, everything I draw from now on needs to employ at least a bit of perspective.

    Let me know what you think

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    It's a nice sketch, it works as sketch because you captured both the drawing idea (it's mot detailed, but we understand its a nazi shooting) without particular anatomy or perspective issue and the energy of the action (like the idea og the flying bullets).

    If you decide togo ahead with it defining better the drawing don't forgot to get some weapon and uniform reference though

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    I like the energy of the drawing. Will you be doing a finished version?

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    So cool!

    Like I've told you before, your sketches are so dynamic and full of energy in a way that it is not trivial to replicate, even for seasoned artists.

    The only thing I would suggest is adding a bit of a dramatic facial expression here and there, it would really make dynamic scenes like this one pop. This guy would look awesome gritting his teeth.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bruce Lee View Post
    I like the energy of the drawing. Will you be doing a finished version?

    Loston
    PS: Why do I get the feeling that the soldiers in your drawings will someday be in a war with the soldiers in the drawings of Brokenhill?
    there's an idea.ha

    and on the drawing i also like the flow.The lines behind his trigger finger arm really give it a feel of motion

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    Quote Originally Posted by JTolliver View Post
    A sketch I did at work:



    I'm making an effort to (as much as possible) avoid drawing anything exactly side on or dead on, everything I draw from now on needs to employ at least a bit of perspective.

    Let me know what you think
    Love the ambient energy in this a lot. Would really like to see return fire and chaotic damage fill it in. Nice sketch!

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