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[Telekinetic Ketchup]

I'm up for crits but I won't acctually change anything as I'm trying to get ahead of my schedual so that I can update more often than once a week, so I'm doing a little bit of a quantity over quality thing, not to say I don't put any effort in them I do I just don't nitpick over the little things, also I will keep all crits in mind for future refference.

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(angles pretty wrong I know)

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PS: there will not now nor ever be any noses in this comic, well perhaps a character of two but nothing will be changed. I'm not giving Brett a nose.

[whitecomics]

Are these inks or just pencils? They look a lot like pencils to me, so I suggest that you either look into inking (if you aren't) or maybe use another type of pen (if you are) since the penciled look you have here isn't really working for me.

Also, you really need to beef up on your knowledge of basic anatomy and proportion. Don't be afraid to use reference photos, and try to start sketching from life so you have a better feel for the human body. I realize you're going for a fairly stylized look here, but you have to learn the rules before you can break them.

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

They're pencils and I do know how to ink I just rather like this look for this comic, and I am working on my anatomy like everyone else, and I sketch from life in class all the time.

Thanks for the tips though I'm working on it. But the pencils stay.

[Wo-Nellie]

PS: there will not now nor ever be any noses in this comic... I'm not giving Brett a nose.

And you don't need to. You're not aiming for realism, so it isn't necessary. Many great cartoony artists have gotten away without many features, mainly: ears, noses, eyebrows. The best example would be the Grim Adventures of Billy and Mandy where noses are actually used often as a plot device by Maxwell Atoms. Mandy never had a nose, and Billy had a giant one, and they used this to great affect.

[whitecomics]

No, of course you don't need to draw noses, or use ink, or do anything else. But insisting on not giving it a try doesn't really make sense to me. Maybe you'll find that the way you're doing things now works best for you, but if you never try doing it any other way, you'll never know for sure.

[Telekinetic Ketchup]

man I've been drawing comics since I was 11 I've done noses I've done different noses I've done ink I've done different ink its not like I'm a comic virgin.

I never said I refuse to ink or use noses in general its just for this comic thats not what I'm going for.



heres some ink and a nose.

[ArmstrongArts]

Ya the anatomy on a style liek this isn't a huge issue unless you are doing something realllllllly bad, and you aren't. Stick to your guns on the nose issue, you have to fight the man. I for one like the pencil with no inks on these pages. I have a feeling i the inks may make them to hard edges compaired to the rest of the work. I could definatley read this as is.