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I'm not sure how this is sequential art, since it looks to be just a random series of zombie-related sketches.
The biggest things that jump out at me immediately is that you need to work on your anatomy and perspective. Buy some books on the subjects, take life drawing classes, sketch people at the mall, etc.
Also remember to draw backgrounds. The one page with a background (the one with the car), is seriously lazy. It's not so much a city street as it a road with a few vague building shapes in the background.
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OK Andres 
besides what Scott has mentioned ( and I do agree ) it seems like your working with just an Idea and no script.You should have a fairly solid idea to work from..then start your thumbs/rough lay outs..then show us some sequential art
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Very sketchy.
On the last page, the one with the side-by-side of the dark-haired girl zombie. That one I just don't get, because in the second panel she looks shocked, but it takes self-awareness in order for a person to register surprise, something zombies typically lack.
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as I mentioned before, the real sequentials are the first pages until the guy drives to the place where the zombies are, because he hears the news in the radio.
after that page I just posted some zombiesketches, to let you know how the zombies look like.
in the second panel of the side by side thing of the dark haired girl zombie she gets her throat cut.
thanks anyway. I appreciate it
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You should invest in a 15" ruler and T-square..start building up your tools...if you need a list ...ask.
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