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    Sequentials ,,,,fight

    ,,,finaly..action.

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    reads clearly, i don't see anything wrong at all.
    -----I can only come up with one suggestion: make panel 5's word balloon perfectly in line with the word balloon in p4 so that the reader reads straight left to right, since the the balloon in p6 is closer distance wise.
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    Yes finally you can enjoy a bit more drawing some action in the page Can't wait to see your "like" Conan character Mirko.

    You're very good in defining what's in foreground and what's in background using the black very well and keeping a good tone balancing in the page as shown in panel 3..making just the shield black and some drapery more dark and the reader eye is focused properly

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    Keeping your quality up Colak
    Nice page

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    ..Thanx !!!!!

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