Shortcircuited

[HanSime]

Lines/colours: me

New version:


Old version:
http://i211.photobucket.com/albums/b...Convention.jpg

Shortcircuited by ~hansime on deviantART


Ironman, Circuitbreaker and (Classics) Skyfire/Jetfire are having a bit of an argument.

[Wo-Nellie]

I like the coloring work on Iron Man.
I can't pinpoint what it is about the rest of it, but the colors on the two other characters aren't quite working for me. Rather than sending out a blast wave, she almost appears to be a Christmas ornament.

[HanSime]

Thanks for the crit!

Hmmm. I think I know what you mean, perhaps the colours simply contrast too much for the intensity of her waves? I'm wondering if it'd look better if I'd increase the yellow intensity on Skyfire a lot, perhaps add a bit of a wave pattern to it?

Someone else commented it might look better if I'd erase some lines from Skyfire in the background where the energy field is, as it's a bit disrupting. I think there's areas where the lineart and texture has become too grainy anyway.

EDIT: Image above replaced by newer version.

Toned down the flashyness, lowered the dodge intensity on a lot of things, erased some lineart bits, added a wave pattern, increased the warmth of the light on Jetfire.