Fusion Jam: Wolverine vs. Alien

[killingyouguy]

Good work NOD. I think Breck's explanation for the alien seems fine. Though it is not made clear in the script, but screw it. We could always add a caption at some point.

I'd say those inks are green lit. You're coloring your page, right?

Breck: that's coming along very nicely. A reminder that you do need to add the costume damage to the first panel.

[N.O.D.]

Quick question.
NODs page show's the alien's tounge thing getting cut off, but I think it also blows out the back of his head in page 6. I didn't check the script, or know that much about alien physiology but is this a problem here? or just ignore it?

I finally understand what you're saying here. I was initially reading it as you thinking I should be showing the back of the head damage to the Alien on my page for some reason.

[malachimanson]

Also remember guys he picked up wolverines claws what is there to say that he didn't pick up some healing factor along the way?

[airbrushartist]

Would have been crazy if the claws had little jaws and teeth like the head.

[Breck]

One panel to go!

[Breck]

Just gonna post a couple notes here for myself.

Looking at gadget's page, the rip in Wolverine's costume on the chest needs to be on the other pec and needs to be bigger.

The belt buckle in panel 1 needs to be a regular buckle.

Panel 1 font should be changed to the font used in panel 4.

Placement of "WHOOSH" in panel 2 is flattening the tail. Should probably be moved to the center of the motion lines, overlapping the tail a little but behind Wolverine's head. Should also be in perspective.

The outline around "TSSSsss" in panel 3 needs to be thicker.

Anyone else got anything they would like to see changed on my page?

[F!]

If I can make a suggestion regarding the cover…

[gadgetwk]

Just gonna post a couple notes here for myself.

Looking at gadget's page, the rip in Wolverine's costume on the chest needs to be on the other pec and needs to be bigger.

The belt buckle in panel 1 needs to be a regular buckle.

Panel 1 font should be changed to the font used in panel 4.

Placement of "WHOOSH" in panel 2 is flattening the tail. Should probably be moved to the center of the motion lines, overlapping the tail a little but behind Wolverine's head. Should also be in perspective.

The outline around "TSSSsss" in panel 3 needs to be thicker.

Anyone else got anything they would like to see changed on my page?

one small thing. the alien's claws on panel 4 could use some work.

i never even noticed the sound effect in panel 3, so i agree there.

your page is fantastic though, great job.

[Breck]

Thanks, gadget. I'll see if I can tighten up those claws. I got a little sloppy on that panel.

[NickRocks]

That cover reminds me too much of civil war. I dig it the more i look at it though. I might do a mock "variant" cover for fun.