The rendering is pretty good. On the first page it's a little hard to tell that the car is approaching. I like this overall. Welcome to PJ!
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Thanks TNT! I appreciate the welcome, and hope to contribute and learn what I can while I'm here.
On that page, that entire middle tier was only supposed to be three panels or so, but at the last minute I decided there's a lot more story that could be told, so eventually I'm going to re-do the page and probably extend it into two.