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    Sequentials The Bankjob

    A single page about some robots about to rob a bank. I tried to make it in a noir-like style but mainly i was just experimenting with textures and stuff.
    Drawing buildings, especially with people next to them is something i'm not really used to so apologies for the really bad bank.

    The bank's sign is just... embarrasing.

    I think it could do with some heavier shadows especially the building.

    Let me know what you think


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    Very nice. Any more pages?

    And where's Bender?

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    I dig it, I think the bank needs heavier shading but the characters are fine. I really like the simplicity of the robots design.
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    It looks good so far.
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    Dig the textures. This totally digital?
    I should get on that...

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    Paulo_p: Thanks. No there aren't any more pages. Benders the driver

    cold-blooded-angel: Glad you like it. Yeah i agree. I think if i wanted a more noir feel i'd have to heavily shadow it.

    Spidey: Thanks man

    CarlosArtWrx: Yeah its totally digital but with some layered textures to make it a bit more interesting.

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    Nice page, but you need to have more contrast in the greys. Right now, it's a bit difficult to distinguish between the suists, the car, the road and the buildings...

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    Nice page, but the 'traced looking bits' (panel 2) clash with the ones that are not. It would be awesome if the style was more consistent.
    Good job.
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