Avengers Assemble.

[Paradox]

Just for kicks.

Any and all feedback welcome.

G.

[TropicalPencil]

I really like your style man. It's a lot of fun to watch and I'm sure it was even more fun to draw. As for crits the only thing I can see is iron man's legs, boots and feet don't seem right. They seem a bit too cloth like to belong on IM, that's not really a crit so much as an opinion. The only real crit is that Thor's left arm is missing

I just really dig this style. I'd love to see this done up in a kind of stained glass effect. That would be really cool. Keep up the good work!

[sacredbob]

This is cool!
I noticed the missing arm on Thor as well. I like the style, though- I'd love to see this in color! Great work!

[PencilVillian]

Some areas can be confusing but this is awesome. Any colorist that's any good would be able to make this pop like crazy.

[Beastie]

Thor weakesn the pic overall I think. He just lacks the action and movement of the other characters - PLUS he looks a bit weird. I'm not sure about how his body is put together there....

Only other thing i'd say is that Cap's facial expression and pose make him look like he's diving for cover - rather thn launching an attack or taking part in an 'Avengers Assemble' moment. FAcially - its because his brow is 'flat'. All of the other characters have 'angry' brows - and it suits their mood more convincingly.

I love everything else

[KNIGHTMARE]

nice style!.. very fun to look at!
Iron man's right hand has no details and the giant guy's (which his name I always forget) leg doesn't look much like a leg..

[Craig DeBoard]

Bust out that compass Doxx and fix Cap's shield. Everything else seems pretty damn perfect but his shield needs to be round without "squiggles" if you will, in it.

[jeremy dale]

I like some of the cartooning, but if I saw a book like this on the shelf? I'd never give it a second glance. Also, some negative space, line depth-- ANYTHING to add dimension to this open, empty look would be good to look into to experiment with to direct the viewer's eyes easier and add some 'oomph' to the piece.


- jeremy

[Paradox]

Thanks for all the kind words guys.