brokenhill
Ryan.Smith
CrazyDiamond
CarlosArtWrx
Morgan Welborn
The point of this draw-off was to redo someone else's sequential page. Please vote for who you think improved upon the original the most. Higher resolution versions of the pages are linked underneath the thumbnails.
brokenhill
Original - Redone
Ryan.Smith
Original - Redone
CrazyDiamond
Original - Redone
Where's the page i sent you Scott?
He said on his DA that he didn't have time to finish it.
Voted for Morgan, BTW. Nothing funnier than death by toaster.
Nugget #296
I wish birds didn't have legs so they'd constantly have spectacular crash landings all day long.
http://ryanamandaanna.deviantart.com/
I can't believe I worried about getting this in on time when I could have just done nothing and nobody would care. SUCKS.
I vote for Morgan also.
I so wish I could have found time to finish this.I feel like a bit of a flake right now.
but a nice flake.
Nugget #296
I wish birds didn't have legs so they'd constantly have spectacular crash landings all day long.
http://ryanamandaanna.deviantart.com/
Sorry Morgan. I got it halfway finished but there just wasn't enough time. I might just go ahead and finish it up anyway and post it here.
Agreed. It's not a death scene, though. This is from my high school comic Zap & Steve, and this is the origin scene of how Zap gets his powers. Joe is a Hollywood stunt man and, as a result of his work, has a callus that extends over his entire body. Steve needs a way to raise $12,000 in a week and creates an "Ultra-Toaster" which he then accidentally drops in Joe's bathwater. Joe gets electricuted but survives because of his callus and finds he has the power to shoot electricity from his body orifices.Originally Posted by Ryan.Smith
Voted for Morgan, BTW. Nothing funnier than death by toaster.
The rest of the comic is about Steve trying to convince Joe to become a superhero and Joe uses his powers to get a TV show made about himself.
I was sixteen when I wrote all this.
Voted for Morgan, but I have to say it: panel two took me out of the story for a moment. You have a very clear right-to-left line of action throughout the whole page, but you broke it on panel two, could've been fixed by flopping the panel.
Sorry, sometimes I can be a stickler for storytelling. Nice job.
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