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Thread: HERE my IRON MAN 3.5

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    Inking HERE my IRON MAN 3.5

    WEll everbody else was doing it SO here's mine.
    C&C welcome

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    Nice work ! His right leg and left arm seem a bit off. I think the foreshortening on his leg needs some work and as for his arm it looks a bit long to me. The only other thing I can suggest is to watch your rendering, it would have been better rendered if you used full thick black lines rather than the "feathered" type of rendering you used. The thick black lines would have lent themselves better to the idea that it's shiny metal we're looking at.

    Overall it's a good piece with few errors. Keep up the good work!

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    Not bad there Steve..
    I have not been able to see the flick...I did see The Invincible Ironman ( animation ) last night lol ( probably have to wait for DVD )
    I think if you took some time this would be looking way cool..flaws an all.

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    As luck would have it I watched the anmated The Invincible Ironman DVD with my kids monday.
    THanks for the tips so far.
    I'm going to have to get some micron felx tip pens ALL i use are .005.

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    I use an 005 for fine detail..a 05-02-01..I'm trying to break away from them and go straight crow-quill and brush...( But that may never totally happen lol )
    Keep up the good fight!
    Bryan

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    You get my respect, Iron man is a bitch to draw, nice one!

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    yes he is. Every time i try i fail. Yet i keep going back and failing i will nail a Iron Man one of these days.

    I dig your Armor Design in this a lot.

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