Well this is definetly the style for Spidey that I grew up with ... and I am digging this piece. However, Scott's points are valid. The lower pelvic and abdominal area are basically not defined (including the rib cage). Also, it is hard to tell if this pic was taken on an angle ... I am not sure if I am seeing some distortion. Jeffo ... I really like this piece ... but I see some areas for improvement ... and I will be completely frank with ya ... they will be pointed out by the guys here. This site is about artistic growth so you will get what people think are honest and hopefully thoughtful critiques and comments. The good and the not so good. So if you aren't open to hearing the "not so good" ... I would maybe set up a deviant page. Though it would be a shame... as I am looking forward to seeing more of your stuff.