sample pages - chance meeting

**liteboxxx** · 10-01-2007, 10:34 AM

chance meeting

page 1

page 2

page 3

you can check my sample cover here

thanks for viewing!

**Drakelb** · 10-01-2007, 10:41 AM

I've been a big fan of your rendering style since the darkness pages. I really enjoy these pages alot. The story telling is much clearer here, and very nicely done. My only big crit, and this is just a pet peece of mine is when backgrounds disspear. I know its a common thing, bit it irks me. When we see the background in one panel and the next it's completely blank.

Your control over the facial expressions was excellent though.

**Mike.M** · 10-01-2007, 11:53 AM

Yeah, love the rendering and facial expressions.

**SpawnSC** · 10-01-2007, 02:05 PM

wow man im impressed great attention to detail and emotion.

**CarlosArtWrx** · 10-01-2007, 02:39 PM

These look great. I think that it's okay when the backgrounds disappear. If you were to put background in every frame it would make the pages too busy.

The thing I think that Drakelb might be seeing is symmetry problems. Sometimes the whole top of the page has background, then the bottom has much less. Or the right side has a lot of background, then the left has a lot less.

It's not really a bad thing per say, I've just noticed that things, when symmetrical, tend to 'feel' better. I wouldn't change that necessarily though, you're style is a really strong one, so I would keep doing what you're doing.

A small crit would be the hands. These seem to be the weakest point of the pages to me. The rest of the anatomy in the pages is very strong, so the hands really stick out to me. (i.e; page one frame 8; page 2 frame 3,4,7; page 3 frame 1,2)

You can definitely do some good hands, they are all over the pages too. I would just say to take some more time to make them all consistently good.

I really like your stuff man, very little to complain about.

**liteboxxx** · 10-02-2007, 03:13 PM

Originally Posted by Drakelb

I've been a big fan of your rendering style since the darkness pages. I really enjoy these pages alot. The story telling is much clearer here, and very nicely done. My only big crit, and this is just a pet peece of mine is when backgrounds disspear. I know its a common thing, bit it irks me. When we see the background in one panel and the next it's completely blank.

Your control over the facial expressions was excellent though.

thanks Drakelb!

**liteboxxx** · 10-02-2007, 03:14 PM

Originally Posted by Mike.M

Yeah, love the rendering and facial expressions.

thanks Mike M.!

**liteboxxx** · 10-02-2007, 03:19 PM

Originally Posted by SpawnSC

wow man im impressed great attention to detail and emotion.

thanks SpawnSC! honestly i realized it was hard drawing ordinary people doing ordinary stuff than action panels....glad that you like it, i'll try to post more soon, thanks again!