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Last edited by mikebowden; 10-24-2012 at 03:06 AM.
wow nice pencils!
I see glimpses of you behind the joe mad. I love Joe mad too, but let's see more of you. Nice work regardless
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Awesome work man. Your stuff is very 'full' and has great depth. The compositions look very original and are a lot of fun to look at.
My only crit would be your character work outclasses your background/architecture and props a lot. Perhaps doing a bit of research in to your locales and props would help give them a bit more authenticity.
I think you should take this stuff to completion and ink it, but that's just me
-simon
Great drawing.
Its cool to see you using the space in the panels.
That's something I have a problem doing.
That may be why the pages seem a bit cramped for me.
Coloring might help set things apart so I'm sure this could work.
Last edited by Jared Lee; 08-15-2007 at 02:24 PM.
I like it but it seems a little too cramped and busy.
You are a very good penciller.
I couldn't help but think: "hopefully a colorist can clarify things." So basically, that means that in the stage which it is now, it's too confusing. I don't know what to look at first! Both inside a single panel, as on the whole page.
Some panels are just - and I'm sorry I have to say this, because all of it is very well drawn- a pain to look at. I have to decipher what's going on, and that can't be a good thing.
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I have no idea what's going on but it looks awesome!
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Last edited by mikebowden; 10-24-2012 at 03:06 AM.
Mike,
You can render like a mofo, but the storytelling is hard to read. You've got the rendering all set so spend half as much time on that and put it on the layout stage.
On Page 1 Panel 5, the hand of the goddess seems like it should be larger considering forshortening and her size.
On PAge 2 Panel 3 what happened to supermans cape?
I think its a little hard to read the hands coming out of the ground to grab the heroes maybe tilt the camera up or down more.
I wouldn't sweat your buildings they look alright. Anyway nice job,good luck.
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