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    Superman

    Just trying a new finishing style..C & C Please...


    Just go to the site you know you want to malacai.net

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    Professional Slayer of Bodies lost-spartan's Avatar
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    My only crit would be that he looks to have the face of a 12 or 13 year old kid, otherwise good work!

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    Puttin the hug in Thug since 2000! RavioliDog's Avatar
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    Your anatomy is off. His chest is a bit large and his midsection is coming across as small. The muscles on his forward leg are off. the perspective on his back leg is weird. It doesn't look like its receding into perspective.

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    Perspective can be tricky to get the hang of. The left arm looks to be too short rather than in perspective and I agree with RavioliDog on the legs. Nice style tho, I like the line work

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    Hey Malacai, I would suggest taking a look at cross hatching techniques. Right now the way you have cross hatching is not achieving the fade that cross hatching is supposed to be used for. (ie it is not doing anything in terms of lighting). Cross hatching is tough to pull off and tedious work. However when applied correctly can really make an image pop. Stephan Platt and Dale Keown were great at it (although you may not necesarily like their anatomy or artwork, they had mastery over cross hatching techniques.)

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