my new sequential art..

[adriyasa]

my new sequential art..http://hendraadriyasa.deviantart.com
i tried to upload these ovet at photobucket....but the site for some reason takes forever to open....like it's down or something...any suggestion where i can upload these somewhere else?

[adriyasa]

[adriyasa]

[ThrashArt]

very good stuff.your bg are great but some of your anatomy in the first 2 pages is off

[adriyasa]

thanks, yeah i know..the egyptian thor guy is a bit messed up...i kinda rushed him a bit...and i also dont like how the sentry's face turned out...he looked so much better in my rough sketch..but then again i alway like rough sketch looks better than clean finished penciled looks...

[Jared Lee]

Very cool story telling!
I love the dramatic timing you used before presenting the Sentry.

Is this based on a script? Or is this something you made yourself?

[adriyasa]

thanks, jared.
i made this my self. so i guess i worte and penciled this.

[Crestmere]

I saw this on DW.

I still think the faces are a little off.

The storytelling is solid though.

[JimLeeforGod]

Everything mentioned above and I would age Sentry a bit unless your going for like a teen Sentry or something. Great job on the backgrounds!

[adriyasa]

thanks...JLFG...altho o wouldnt vote him for my god, but his art is one of the reason i started drawing comicbooks a long time ago...during his uncanny xmen run. ehhehe.
okay i pay more attention to the faces next time.
and about the sentry..yeah i wanted to make him look younger..wouldnt be cool if the sentry turns out to be one of the eternals..