Spidey 3 battle scene WIP

**Dri** · 05-17-2007, 04:43 AM

Going to cook up a scene from the movie that I really enjoyed. Was trying to find reference for Harry's crap suit but the net is slow and I wanna get stuck into it. Usually I post this stuff in the sketch blog but want some crits on my WIP. Anyhow...this is the start.

**HazelNut-624** · 05-17-2007, 05:52 AM

well i gotta say, it definatley looks like james franco, good job so far.

**Dri** · 05-17-2007, 11:15 AM

Thanks hazlenut. He's got very exaggerated features to get wrong but I'm torn between putting him in his new outfit on having it close to how it was depicted in the movie. For the sake of interesting storytelling I'll redo this with the movie outfit. Should I have Spidey with or without the mask? Might try both. Thanks for looking.

**Dri** · 05-18-2007, 09:28 AM

Will add his movie outfit over the top of this drawing. Just wanted to see how he looked in normal attire and a ski boot.

Any suggestion, crits and comments welcome.

**Dri** · 05-19-2007, 07:56 AM

Something I'm playing with in photoshop by working out a backdrop, props, clothes for a scene I liked in Spiderman 3. However I might change it because it looks dull.

**Bruce Lee** · 05-19-2007, 08:52 AM

Hey, man. Cool sketches, but you should be careful where you're placing Harry's hand (holding the pumpkin bomb). At first glance, it looks like Harry's doing something very wrong with that bomb! Moving his arm so that the hand and bomb are further from his crotch would be an EXCELLENT idea.

Loston

**HazelNut-624** · 05-19-2007, 10:47 AM

Originally Posted by Bruce Lee

Hey, man. Cool sketches, but you should be careful where you're placing Harry's hand (holding the pumpkin bomb). At first glance, it looks like Harry's doing something very wrong with that bomb! Moving his arm so that the hand and bomb are further from his crotch would be an EXCELLENT idea.

Loston

HAHAHAHA i have'nt laughed that hard in forever!! his face is perfect for that lol

anyways, i'm really liking this so far, peter looks almost exactly like tobey maquire and everything looks great to me so far, can't wait to see the finished project.

**slizerone** · 05-19-2007, 03:30 PM

I really enjoy looking at your renderings, that's one thing for sure.
very need.

One thing that I think is a bit off, is the foot of the guy laying on the floor, like it is hanging in an invisible gap or so.

But the way you place your lines is just something else, I like that.

**Dri** · 05-19-2007, 06:27 PM

Originally Posted by Bruce Lee

Hey, man. Cool sketches, but you should be careful where you're placing Harry's hand (holding the pumpkin bomb). At first glance, it looks like Harry's doing something very wrong with that bomb! Moving his arm so that the hand and bomb are further from his crotch would be an EXCELLENT idea.

Loston

Well, I posted the original sketches and no one said a thing. When I decide to flesh it out more I get the responses lol. Honestly I didn't see this pic going that way and it's making me laugh because I did a pic not too long ago which stirred those type of comments.

Originally Posted by HazelNut-624

HAHAHAHA i have'nt laughed that hard in forever!! his face is perfect for that lol

anyways, i'm really liking this so far, peter looks almost exactly like tobey maquire and everything looks great to me so far, can't wait to see the finished project.

Thanks. I was telling Doctor Baltar not too long ago that my art has been good for a laugh, intentional or not.

Originally Posted by slizerone

I really enjoy looking at your renderings, that's one thing for sure.
very need.

One thing that I think is a bit off, is the foot of the guy laying on the floor, like it is hanging in an invisible gap or so.

But the way you place your lines is just something else, I like that.

You are right about the foot..I was actually going to have him wearing dress shoes with the viewer being able to see under his foot. Thanks for the comments.