'This sort' of art is always so difficult to comment on: I don't mean to sound condescending, so I apologise in advance if I do, but it's not easy telling if the look of the art was intentional, or that your skills have not yet sufficiently evolved.
The storytelling feels a bit clunky: straight-on shots, save for the first and third panel (that 3rd panel is very nice, by the way); no sense of spatial relationship (really irksome, like an itch you can't quite reach, only mental); garish and in some cases gradient colours; a bit of odd writing (especially the caption box in panel 1); and that guy suddenly showing up in the last panel.
You do know how to set up a story though. I'm interested in what's going to happen next. And incorporating the A Perfect Circle logo brought a smile to my face. Just keep posting and you're bound to improve.