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    Prez art ---- Birds of Prey

    Here's my 2cd post


    Black Canary


    Huntress


    Birds of Prey

    There is also some Red Sonja pages floating around here. Thanks for looking tell me what you think...

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    These are pretty good!

    Not a big fan of the way you draw lips though. Kinda looks like the women that have had too much plastic surgury. And women should have thinner fingers. Some of the hands look mannish and out of proportion. I guess that's the Ramos style coming through in your work?
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    Too much lips, WAYYY too much boobs.
    That's borderline "one-handed drawing" there.

    However, your vynil rendreing is sharp. Good stuff.

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    You draw very well. I like drawings 2, and 3 a lot.
    The position of the hips in the first drawing bother me. Her hips should be lower.
    Still great drawings ,and a nice style.

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    Yea I gotta say as good as these are, the breasts are indeed way too big. It's comicy/cartoony so proportions can be off a bit, so everything else besides what I forementioned looks good.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chris Major View Post
    Too much lips, WAYYY too much boobs.
    BLASPHEMER! No such thing.

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    If you tone down some of the features you'll really have something here. You've a really good grasp of these characters and the poses that really compliment them!

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    I have to agree with the others, the lips and breasts need to be toned way down. I know it is a style thing and it is supposed to be cartoony/comic but it really is overshadowing the excellent talent at the core of the drawings. It has been exaggerated to the point where it is not attractive, but instead scary and gross.

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    Someone likes Ed Benes...

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    Things are a little extreme in areas that probably dont need it but great drawings all around.
    Never be afraid to erase, redraw, erase, and redraw until you get what you want.

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