Final Deadpool. for drawoff

[G-Man]

Here is my final copy of my Deadpool for the drawoff.
There are a couple of things I think are still wrong but this is going to be my submition for the drawoff.

[G-Man]

Oh mah Gawd.
I gotst'a lot tah learnz!

[anthonyharrisart]

We've all got a lot to learn, that's the nature of the game. You're not sticking to cliche poses, you're moving muscle masses, and other than slight anatomical problems with his left (our right) leg, it's a solid pic. I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

[G-Man]

Thanks.
This is no excuse, but, this is my first time drawing deadpool. First time drawing a gun aswell.
I really think my best copy is the rough copy that is on loose-leaf.
But in that one his chest and waist was a bit small, and the handle of the sword thingy was bent.
In this one, my handle is straight, but the blade is all swervey.

For a while I'm working on a couple of my own ideas called "G-Man" and "Sanctum from the Dead". And I'm not going to try and begin to try and get them published till a good time after I finish school. Right now I'm in the 1oth grade, so I have alot of time to work on my art and a little of my writing.

Thanks again Anthony.
And good luck with the draw-off.

[HitNRun]

The more I look at this picture, the more I think it's a good piece. Quite solid. A few things I see that don't make sense (when compared to the works of pencilist for Cable/Deadpool) - Deadpools arm should be lower if he's jumping and firing. That, and both feet should be pointing downward if he's jumping and he hasn't peaked at his jump yet. I only see maybe 3 flaws in the muscle structure which is good because that means you're getting a better understanding of the body. Good, solid work man, good luck with the draw off!!