spiderman and his amazing friends

[ielle77]

ok i didn't draw this (i wish i did lol). It's by Jeremy Dale who said i could color it. Anyway, this is probably the 4th time i've really tried to color with photoshop so please crit away. I used a color scheme that they used on the cover of one of the Spiderman Loves MJ books. Which was just two separate colors.

here's a link to the original, oh and other work too! Anyway please crit away (and take some time to check out Jeremy's other work, it's great. Especially his comic, Absolute Zeroes

[jeremy dale]

Yay! I dig it, ielle! Fun stuff.

- jeremy

[Jared Lee]

I like what you've done with this so far. Since this is based on an animated cartoon simplefits the style.
You did a great job of not over doing it.

I would like to suggest a few things for Iceman and Firestar.

It would be cool if you colored Iceman's lines blue, and maybe saturating his color some more. He seems too hard with the colors you gave him. Just to give him a cooler look. It would be as if he was reflecting some ambient light from the sky through him.

Also Firestar's flames could have their outline colored as well.

[Frito]

Great stuff, ielle.

Maybe you could add some highlights just to make it standout that little more.
Also try adding some really light blue, almost white, to ice man. It may make him look a little more shiney.

This is of course if you didn't want to use that 2 seperate colours thing.

Like i said before awesome work and I hope to see more of it in the future.

[di.straido]

Hi Ielle... i like very much of your job... i agree with Frito.. the him tips are more useful in this draw!!!